Station Wallet Copywriting

Sharing here screenshots of the current state of the app, followed by tables for entering updated copy. The new copy has been provided by Subvisual and is to be considered a suggestion.

Onboarding

There isn’t really a “connecting” step any more, the purpose of the onboarding is just an introduction and then getting consent, afterwards the app is already operating. I think onboarding can be reworked heavily.

This is mostly redundant. Can we remove this screen?
This wallet disclaimer might be good to have, but I’d rather have it in the wallet help screen, so that the onboarding can be shorter. Can we also remove this screen, so that we have just 2: Introduction and consent?

I believe this just stays
Introduction Title
Introduction Body
2nd Screen TitleRewards
2nd Screen BodyTo get you set up, Station will create a new Filecoin Wallet, just for you. FIL will be transferred to your wallet according to your participation in the economy.
Consent Title
Consent Body

Dashboard

New copy here: “Open Wallet”
Link to open walletOpen Wallet ✅

Wallet

This is all new copy
STATION ADDRESSYOUR STATION ADDRESS
YOUR FIL ADDRESSDESTINATION ADDRESS
Enter an address to receive your FIL.Enter a destination address for the transfer
TOTAL FIL
Transfer FIL
Help 1YOUR STATION WALLET
Your Station Wallet has a unique address, where all the FIL you earn will be stored. Station will send FIL to this wallet on a regular basis, based on your contributions.
Help 2TRANSFERRING YOUR FIL
In order to transfer FIL out of your Station Wallet, you need to set a destination FIL address to which to send your FIL. We recommend you regularly transfer the FIL in your Station Wallet to a more secure wallet.
Help 3GAS FEES
All transactions on the blockchain incur a small gas fee, which can vary depending on network activity. This is deducted from the total amount you are transferring.

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LoadingFetching previous transactions…
The “Transfer FIL” button changes to “Send X FIL”, plus there is a new “Cancel” button
Send X FIL
Cancel
These are the states of the transaction list
ONGOING TRANSFER
Sending X FIL to Y
Processing…
Failed
Sent
Sent X FIL to Y
Received X FIL

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